The art of business writing - the Write the Talk blog

Writing with colour – will any hue do?

It's important to have colour in writing. Dullness just gives your reader another reason to go elsewhere, and few of us have the luxury of a tied reader.

But what is colour, and will any hue do?

The answer is no. Think decor and you will get the general idea of what is good and what isn't:

• colour should highlight and not obscure: the more people notice the colour, the less they notice your theme. Don't overdo it and you will attract the right kind of attention.
• choose well: a little bit of thought can bring out a phrase or description that's a good fit and says something about you. Pick up the obvious roll of woodchip or pot of magnolia and you'll do your writing a disservice.
• try not to mix your decoration too much: a bit of coordination between the images you use or the similes you employ can give nice balance to a piece's readability. Try it and see what happens.

So, no colouring by numbers. Look for opportunities to add something extra to what you write and you will make your writing your own.

Writers' block

This blog's been on a break, so I thought I'd start the month with a piece on writer's block.

Block is cited by many creatives as a reason for not being able to write when they want or need to. It's not the preserve of fiction writers though: anyone who writes regularly can find themselves unable to get the words out. So is block a useful description and what can it tell us about how to get round the problem?

In my opinion, writer's block isn't a terribly helpful term. It suggests a single cause and a single solution, neither of which is true.  If you're having trouble writing, you have to be more specific about what's not working. The next time you're struggling, try these diagnises and the corresponding techniques to get back on track.

You don't know what to write about (1): Ask the question whether you really have a writing need first. If there are no ideas burning their way out, then that's a message you need to listen to. However, any creative stimulus will help you come up with some new ideas. I'll do more on this in a later post, but for now try the free writing method - write whatever comes into your head for 3 minutes, with absolutely no self-editing. See where it takes you.

You don't know what to write about (2): Perhaps you have too many ideas and don't know which one to go with first. Well, thank your lucky stars then write down the first five ideas that spring to mind. There's a reason they were the first five out ...

You don't know how to start: Then don't start at the beginning. There's no law that says you have to start any writing with the first sentence. Start anywhere you like then fill the gaps.

You don't think you're good enough: Self-criticism is a very destructive mental process, but it's just that. It's only you telling yourself that what you're about to write is rubbish. So what do you know? Let others be the judge of the quality of what you write, learn from any feedback you get, and keep getting better. Not writing, just in case it's not good enough, is a crime.

Keep writing, all the time, and you won't go too far wrong.

Is it worth getting the words on your website done professionally?

I had a call from a prospective client this morning. He had been referred to me enthusisatically by a mutual colleague and was considering whether to invest in professional copywriting support. His business already had a website that was working OK but he felt there was more that could be done.

When we'd first spoken a couple of months ago, he'd been clear that he would be testing the return on any copywriting investment he made before making any significant commitment. Using Google Analytics he intended to compare the performance of the new homepage I would put together with the current page and the results would determine whether he would proceed further.

Today's call was about the results of that test. All of his measures of success had improved with the new page: visits, click-throughs, conversions to calls etc. "Ten out of ten" was his assessment of the impact that the copywriting had had. So we're getting down to work on the rest of the site and a long term relationship is in the offing.

Good copywriting makes a real difference to the success of a website. Don't be afraid to test the quality of any writing that's done for you, but don't be tempted into thinking that any old words will do. You don't know how much business you might be missing out on.

Treat what you write like an exclusive club

I'm editing an article written by a consultant. He clearly knows his subject and the structure of the piece is absolutely fine. His problem, and it's a common one, is that he uses too many words. To be precise, he uses too many unnecessary words.

If you want your reader to understand what you are saying, give them the space to think and absorb your words. Telling them twice in the same sentence, repeating yourself, or saying the same thing in different ways, doesn't help. See what I mean?

Editing is a really important step in any writing (I will keep coming back to this subject in future blogs). For now, I'll look at one aspect. When you are rereading what you have written, only keep words that deserve their place. George Orwell suggested that writers should take out every adjective they've written and only put back the ones that are absolutely necessary. For a business piece, try taking out words and phrases in the longer sentences and see what effect that has. Unless your meaning evaporates like taxis on a rainy night, leave them out.

So treat the words you use like members of an exclusive club. No deadbeats or freeloaders, just those that add value and you couldn't do without. If your writing has an open house policy, get some bouncers on the door before it's too late.